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Fic: Never to Deny, Gwen/Valiant, PG-13

Title: Never to Deny
Rating: PG-13
Characters/Pairing: Gwen/Valiant
Warning: implied roughness.
Summary: Gwen has always been safe. Until he came around.

Author's Notes: written for the Gwen Battle Winter 2009 hosted by thefuturequeen. Prompt: Gwen/Valiant, secrets. Feedback wanted! :D Cut quote by Bertolt Brecht. Just an ickle drabble: 200 words



It was the way his hands moved over her skin (how did you get that bruise, Gwen?), how his lips pressed roughly to hers (take some water, your lips look chapped), that his teeth would sink into her in hidden places marking her as his own (you're standing a little strangely, Gwen. did you take a fall?).

He was dangerous (you're cautious, Gwen) and the adrenaline when she saw him (ever soft and sweet), her arousal when he touched her (always the lady in the handmaiden's uniform) and the way she could let herself go (I know you'll always be safe) made her blood careen through her body and had her feeling as though she could be dangerous too.

"You don't come often enough," he growled, menacing, in her ear when they were finished the first time that night.

And then she felt menacing too. "It's as often as I want or not at all." She raised her knee to his groin in case she had to fight him away. The thought sent a new bolt through her, hair raising on her arms, and she almost hoped she would.

He growled but did not argue and pushed her back to take again.

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ex_absolute
Feb. 1st, 2009 07:02 am (UTC)
YES.

I've been waiting for this since you claimed the prompt.

This is AMAZING. Seriously. In fact I was sold from the first moment.

[It was the way his hands moved over her skin (how did you get that bruise, Gwen?)]

Best opening I've read in a while.

I want to say more but I'm spazzing. ♥
kepp0xy
Feb. 1st, 2009 11:20 pm (UTC)
Oh good! I had a really tough time thinking of a way to write them believably, so it's great to hear that this worked.

Valiant would certainly bring out an interesting flavour to Gwen were something to start between them... Everyone has a dark side, afterall. *resists making Star Wars reference*

:D:D:D I'm super glad you liked!
blacksquirrel
Feb. 1st, 2009 07:06 pm (UTC)
OMG GWEN! Yes! I *love* what you've done here, deepening the characterization.
kepp0xy
Feb. 2nd, 2009 12:06 am (UTC)
Thank you very much! I had a really tough time thinking of a way to write them believably, so it's great to hear that this worked.

Valiant and Gwen would have an interesting dynamic; he would be a corrupting force while I could see her goodness reigning him in slightly. It would be a very interesting mix.
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